tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post1184865016896831002..comments2023-07-24T09:42:25.750-06:00Comments on ENGLISH 189 BLOG: GRAMMAR QUESTION, April 14thVeronica Baighttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-83511860888573520092009-04-20T08:15:00.000-06:002009-04-20T08:15:00.000-06:00Dejo: A good solution:-)
Tammy: That comma does ca...Dejo: A good solution:-)<br />Tammy: That comma does cause you problems:-)Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-32549563007084839872009-04-18T20:36:00.000-06:002009-04-18T20:36:00.000-06:00Jack Lemay was seriously injured when his car went...Jack Lemay was seriously injured when his car went off the road, due to his erratic driving.Tammynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-65343118213013972342009-04-18T08:32:00.000-06:002009-04-18T08:32:00.000-06:00Jack Lemay was seriously injured when his erratic ...Jack Lemay was seriously injured when his erratic driving caused the car to go off the road.Dejonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-33842546403680387672009-04-17T09:00:00.000-06:002009-04-17T09:00:00.000-06:00Irena: Pretty good--check the punctuation, and try...Irena: Pretty good--check the punctuation, and try to avoid using "got" (it's a slang usage)--there are other verbs that more precise.<br />Kelsey: A good, if wordy, solution;-) The revision works better:-)<br />Marie-Christine: Yes, but watch your spelling, and note that in theis case, the adverb "erratically" works better after the verb.<br />Janine: On the right track, but it's not clear that Jack was the person who was driving erratically;-)Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-12335233225863407962009-04-17T05:51:00.000-06:002009-04-17T05:51:00.000-06:00Due to erratic driving, Jack Lemay was seriously i...Due to erratic driving, Jack Lemay was seriously injured when his car went off the road.Janinenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-74814146364388601582009-04-16T10:04:00.000-06:002009-04-16T10:04:00.000-06:00Please cancel my first draft.
The car that Jack L...Please cancel my first draft.<br /><br />The car that Jack Lemay was erracticaly driving went off the road; Jack was seriously injured.Pivetta Marie Christinenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-3399716380410003202009-04-16T09:49:00.000-06:002009-04-16T09:49:00.000-06:00Correction: Jack Lemay was seriously injured when ...Correction: Jack Lemay was seriously injured when the car he was driving erratically went off the road.Kelseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-53891374111380185772009-04-16T09:48:00.000-06:002009-04-16T09:48:00.000-06:00The driver, Jack Lemay, was seriously injured when...The driver, Jack Lemay, was seriously injured when the car he was driving erraticly went off the road.Kelseynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-2644370392664186332009-04-15T12:28:00.000-06:002009-04-15T12:28:00.000-06:00The car was driving erratically when it went off t...The car was driving erratically when it went off the road and the driver, Jack Lemay, got seriously injured.Irenanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-80451206016077539102009-04-15T07:57:00.000-06:002009-04-15T07:57:00.000-06:00Samantha: You have made some interesting changes, ...Samantha: You have made some interesting changes, butyou have arrived at a good solution.<br />Tammy: Yes, but do checkthe punctuation.<br />Nancy: You're on the right track; check verb usage.Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-89479304504925444392009-04-15T04:44:00.000-06:002009-04-15T04:44:00.000-06:00Jack Lemay's erratic driving cause the car the go ...Jack Lemay's erratic driving cause the car the go off the road and left him with serious injuries.Nancynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-64542073430446024982009-04-14T21:30:00.000-06:002009-04-14T21:30:00.000-06:00Jack Lemay was seriously injured, when his car wen...Jack Lemay was seriously injured, when his car went off the road due to his erratic driving.Tammynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-90083368010743984462009-04-14T19:10:00.000-06:002009-04-14T19:10:00.000-06:00Due to his erratic driving manner, Jack Lemay suff...Due to his erratic driving manner, Jack Lemay suffered serious injuries when his car went off the raod.Samanthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12310763465900928712noreply@blogger.com