tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post2257520909147255434..comments2023-07-24T09:42:25.750-06:00Comments on ENGLISH 189 BLOG: PLAIN ENGLISH, May 20thVeronica Baighttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-62702380303552873092009-05-29T07:55:49.304-06:002009-05-29T07:55:49.304-06:00Irena: Good, you have got rid of the passive voice...Irena: Good, you have got rid of the passive voice--note that you need "the practice"; you changed the verb so that the agreement issue is solved, but you changed the verb tense--now you also need to change the following structure to make it "a loss leader" and "a promotional incentive".Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-10083442321064519092009-05-29T06:02:43.404-06:002009-05-29T06:02:43.404-06:00The advertising department finds that practice of ...The advertising department finds that practice of offering a free gift to customer is loss leaders, and revenues show giving the gift as promotional incentive is insufficient.Irenanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-62801736332087863262009-05-28T09:08:01.512-06:002009-05-28T09:08:01.512-06:00Irena: That's an inmprovement, but you still have ...Irena: That's an inmprovement, but you still have passive voice verbs and an agreement issue;-)Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-23046148569278800002009-05-28T07:19:04.397-06:002009-05-28T07:19:04.397-06:00The advertising department found that practice of ...The advertising department found that practice of offering a free gift to customers have been loss leaders, and revenues have shown that giving the gift as promotional incentive has been insufficient.Irenanoreply@blogger.com