tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post4327432844213660784..comments2023-07-24T09:42:25.750-06:00Comments on ENGLISH 189 BLOG: GRAMMAR QUESTION, Jan 26thVeronica Baighttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-62095042770690595452009-01-31T08:41:00.000-07:002009-01-31T08:41:00.000-07:00Tammy: Very close--just a comma missing!Tammy: Very close--just a comma missing!Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-76886528541088498662009-01-30T17:49:00.000-07:002009-01-30T17:49:00.000-07:00I was rushing to get my shopping done, but there w...I was rushing to get my shopping done, but there were too many people in the mall. I was in such a hurry, that the shirt I bought was too small and now I must return it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-79770551257314548132009-01-28T19:31:00.000-07:002009-01-28T19:31:00.000-07:00Nancy: Very close--check punctuation.Tammy: Almost...Nancy: Very close--check punctuation.<BR/>Tammy: Almost--check punctuation and your use of the various forms of to/too.Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-20654312519965189892009-01-28T15:21:00.000-07:002009-01-28T15:21:00.000-07:00I was rushing to get my shopping done but there we...I was rushing to get my shopping done but there were to many people in the mall. I was in such a hurry that the shirt I bought was too small and now I have to return it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-19468844661862288902009-01-28T12:31:00.000-07:002009-01-28T12:31:00.000-07:00There were too many people at the mall, so I hurri...There were too many people at the mall, so I hurried. I was in such a hurry that the shirt I bought was not big enough, and I have to return it.BLowenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03153037167031003807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-47266740411761132232009-01-27T18:58:00.000-07:002009-01-27T18:58:00.000-07:00There were to much people at the mall so I was hur...There were to much people at the mall so I was hurried up shopping, I was so hurried that the shirt I bought's not big enough and I'm having to return it.<BR/><BR/>The mall was so full of people that I shopped quickly. I was in such a rush that the shirt I bought was not big enough and I have to return it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-1435548798822460602009-01-27T17:49:00.000-07:002009-01-27T17:49:00.000-07:00Marie-Christine: You are on the right track. Now t...Marie-Christine: You are on the right track. Now think about subject-verb agreement and punctuation;-)<BR/>Marie-France & Blowen: Close--check punctuation.Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-22267090924261756472009-01-27T17:07:00.000-07:002009-01-27T17:07:00.000-07:00There were too many people at the mall so I hurrie...There were too many people at the mall so I hurried. I was in such a hurry that the shirt I bought was not big enough and I have to return it.BLowenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03153037167031003807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-18356287603888006922009-01-27T12:11:00.000-07:002009-01-27T12:11:00.000-07:00reweeThere were too many people at the mall so I h...reweeThere were too many people at the mall so I had to hurry up shopping.I was so much in a hurry that the shirt I bought was too small and I have to return it.Marie-France Brassardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14545484913063363605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-33171099591669581182009-01-26T13:25:00.000-07:002009-01-26T13:25:00.000-07:00There was so many people at the mall so I had to h...There was so many people at the mall so I had to hurry up. I was so busy hurrying that the shirt I bought was too small and had to return it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com