tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post8979324091918365527..comments2023-07-24T09:42:25.750-06:00Comments on ENGLISH 189 BLOG: ALL CHANGE! Dec. 1stVeronica Baighttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-4545998533169614442008-12-10T12:46:00.000-07:002008-12-10T12:46:00.000-07:00Tammy: Yes, you really needed to change that adver...Tammy: Yes, you really needed to change that adverb as well.Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-65091238253004016032008-12-10T12:01:00.000-07:002008-12-10T12:01:00.000-07:005. The cold snow melted gently from the atmosphere...5. The cold snow melted gently from the atmosphere.<BR/>6. The cold snow melted gently through the atmosphere.<BR/><BR/>Yes this is a difficult sentence to re-write. However, I hope my changes are correct :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-6667467361757760812008-12-06T08:53:00.000-07:002008-12-06T08:53:00.000-07:00Karin: That's a good sentence, but you were only s...Karin: That's a good sentence, but you were only supposed to make the one change and to make that change on the previous sentence posted (the one from Irena).Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-75912654238157521732008-12-05T21:32:00.000-07:002008-12-05T21:32:00.000-07:00The fluffy snowflakes fell quietly from the sky.The fluffy snowflakes fell quietly from the sky.Agneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02184070825247135739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-5180721141666267782008-12-05T08:35:00.000-07:002008-12-05T08:35:00.000-07:00Margaret: Yes.Irena: I'm having a little trouble u...Margaret: Yes.<BR/>Irena: I'm having a little trouble understanding this one, but grammatically it is correct.Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-62912371710257155442008-12-02T13:49:00.000-07:002008-12-02T13:49:00.000-07:004. The fluffy snow melted gently from the atmosphe...4. The fluffy snow melted gently from the atmosphere.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-77839083555870105632008-12-02T12:01:00.000-07:002008-12-02T12:01:00.000-07:00The fluffy snow fell gently from the atmosphere.The fluffy snow fell gently from the atmosphere.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08380110503836645568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-11890981433325108122008-12-02T08:22:00.000-07:002008-12-02T08:22:00.000-07:00Margaret and Brenda(?):--A good start to the exerc...Margaret and Brenda(?):--A good start to the exercise.Veronica Baighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699213044999575738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-36760697214818074052008-12-01T20:04:00.000-07:002008-12-01T20:04:00.000-07:00The fluffy snow fell slowly from the atmosphere.The fluffy snow fell slowly from the atmosphere.BLowenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03153037167031003807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1112724878128717335.post-71367627867006946212008-12-01T15:26:00.000-07:002008-12-01T15:26:00.000-07:00The fluffy snow fell slowly from the sky.The fluffy snow fell slowly from the sky.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08380110503836645568noreply@blogger.com