Sunday, January 21, 2007

GRAMMAR QUESTION OF THE WEEK, Jan. 21st

There are several errors in the following sentence. Please rewrite this sentence correctly. Note that there are many possible answers; there are lots of opportunities for bonus points.

The entertaining business is interested and its possible to meet famous people and receive ticket for popular events.


5 comments:

vic said...

The entertainment business is interested in meeting famous people and if it is possible to recive tickets for popular events.

vic said...

The entertainment business is interesting and it's possible to meet famous people also receive tickets for popular events.

Veronica Baig said...

Victoria: With these two sentences you have shown that it is possible to have two different interpretations by changing the word form. There are still some errors here, and there are other possible interpretations, too.

Michelle said...

Obtaining tickets for popular events makes it possible to meet famous people in the entertainment business.

Veronica Baig said...

Michelle: You have a good sentence, but you have changed the meaning.