Writing clear, direct English is particularly important in a business context. Please rewrite the following item; there are many different but correct ways of doing this.
At the end of the day, we would be failing in our responsibility to those other subscribers who have faithfully kept their promise to support our very worthy cause, if we did not request that you similarly fulfill your obligation to us.
Hint: Check Chapter 9 of Barron's Business English, and avoid using the passive voice and other wordy construction!
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