Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The twin’s were unusual amused, first they entertain there school’s friends’ by telling jokes, than they had chased after the neighboring dog and it was ended when they had imitated their friend’s.
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The twins were unusually amused; first they had entertained school friends' by telling jokes; then they had chased after the neighbourhood dog, and it had ended when they had imitated their friends.
AMIN: There are some good changes here, but now think about whether you need the active or passive voice, and also think about word form, word confusion, and verb tense;-)
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