Correct the errors in the following sentence:
If you don't mind me asking where you are going when me and my secretary saw you going out the door at 3:00 pm last Friday.
Remember that there is more than one possible correct answer.
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Saturday, April 28, 2007
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If you don’t mind me asking, where were you going when my secretary and I saw you going out the door last Friday at 3:00pm?
My secretary and I saw you going out the door at 3:00pm last Friday. Do you mind if I ask where you were going?
Vic: There's a pronoun error in the first entry; for that reason the second one is better.
If you don't mind me asking, where were you going at 3:00 p.m. last Friday?
Last Friday we saw you leave at 3:00 p.m. If you don't mind me asking, where were you going?
Michelle: Both are good suggestions, but you also have the same pronoun error in both versions.
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