Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The company were fantastic and their presentation impressive. The judges said it won the bid easily and with style however the losing companies were saying that the judges had made a dubious decision.
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The company was fantastic and their presentation was impressive. The judges said it won the bid easily and with style; however, the losing companies said the judges made a dubious decision.
Vic: Good work (just one small item left)--there are still other possibilities out there!
The company was fantastic and their presentation was impressive. The judges said it won the bid easily and with style. However, the losing companies said that the judges had made a dubious decision.
Pretty good, Mihoko. There's one little improvement you could make.
The company was fantastic and the presentation very impressive. The judges said, "it won the bid easily and with style”.
However, the losing companies said, ‘that the judges had made a dubious decision’.
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