Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The team is real happy that they won the game and now the players recover from the party they had thrown afterwards.
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The team is very happy they won the game. The players are now recovering from the party they had to celebrate their win.
The team is really happy they won the game, and now the players must recover from the party they had afterwards.
Margaret and Brenda: Almost there;-)
The team, happy that they won the game, is now recovering from the party they held to celebrate.
The team is really happy that they won the game, and now the players are recovering from the party they threw afterward.
The team is really happy that they won the game and now, the players must recover from the party they had thrown afterwards.
The team is very happy they won the game, now the players are recovering from the after party celebrating their win.
Margaret: You're very close!
Irena: You're also very close.
Jacquie: Close, but check agreement and verb tense;-)
Katin: Getting there--check agreement and also check the awkward wording in the second clause.
The team is happy that they won the game. The are now recovering from the party they held to celebrate.
Margaret: You're "fixing" the wrong thing;-)
The team is really happy they won the game. The players are now recovering from the party they had afterwards.
Brenda: You're almost there.
The team is recovering from the victory party they held; after very happily winning the game.
The team is happy they won the game. Now the players are recovering from the victory party.
Tammy: Think agreement and punctuation--see the answers in the Course Announcement;-)
Brenda: Still an agreement error--see the answers;-)
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