Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The commentator said its the most unique program was skated at the competition and they are skating unbelievable therefore it hasn't been surprised that the audience have given them the standing ovation.
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The commentator said it's the most unique program that was skated at the competition, and that skating was unbelievable. Therefore, it wasn't surprising that the audience had given a standing ovation.
YUKIKO: You have made a lot of good changes here. Now I would like you to think about word usage and pronoun reference and try again;-)
Hi, Veronica,
Here is my new answer:
The commentator said this was the most unique program that was skated at the competition, and the skating was unbelievable. Therefore, it wasn't surprising the audience had given a standing ovation.
YUKIKO: You improved the pronoun reference issue--good--, but there's still a word usage problem;-)
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