If you shouldn't mind me to ask where you are going when me and my sister’s seen you last week as you had been getting on bus on the Main street.
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7 comments:
If you don’t mind me asking, where were you going when my sister and I saw you last week getting into a bus on Main Street?
If you don't mind, I would like to ask where where you going last week when my sister and me saw you getting on a bus on the main street?
COLIN: A good answer, but think about adding some punctuation, and think about whether "into" is the best preposition to use here;-)
AMIN: It can be a good idea to rearrange the sentence; I think you have a typo (where/were). You also need to check pronoun usage and punctuation;-)
My sister and I saw you getting on the bus at Main Street last week; where were you going, if you don't mind my asking?
ASHLEE: This is a good answer, but you need to think about punctuation; you have the one item that is not needed, and you have missed something else that is needed;-)
Veronica, you got me stumped. I think the punctuation you are talking about is the semi-colon but I don't see what I've added or I've missed .
ASHLEE:The answer is published later today;-)
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