Saturday, December 1, 2007

ALL CHANGE! Dec. 1st

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 6 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 6. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

The fluffy snowflakes fell slowly from the sky.

1. change the subject noun 2. change indirect object noun
3. change the first adverb 4. change the first verb name
5. change the adjective 6. change the verb tense

10 comments:

Margaret said...

The fluffy snow fell slowly from the sky.

BLowen said...

The fluffy snow fell slowly from the atmosphere.

Veronica Baig said...

Margaret and Brenda(?):--A good start to the exercise.

Margaret said...

The fluffy snow fell gently from the atmosphere.

IRENA said...

4. The fluffy snow melted gently from the atmosphere.

Veronica Baig said...

Margaret: Yes.
Irena: I'm having a little trouble understanding this one, but grammatically it is correct.

Karin G said...

The fluffy snowflakes fell quietly from the sky.

Veronica Baig said...

Karin: That's a good sentence, but you were only supposed to make the one change and to make that change on the previous sentence posted (the one from Irena).

Tammy said...

5. The cold snow melted gently from the atmosphere.
6. The cold snow melted gently through the atmosphere.

Yes this is a difficult sentence to re-write. However, I hope my changes are correct :-)

Veronica Baig said...

Tammy: Yes, you really needed to change that adverb as well.