Wednesday, April 30, 2008

GRAMMAR QUESTION, April 30th

Correct the errors in the following sentence:

If you shouldn't mind me to ask where you are going when me and my sisters seen you last week.

Remember that there is more than one possible correct answer.

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9 comments:

Samantha said...

If you don't mind me asking, where were you going when me and my sister seen you last week?

Ying Meng said...

If you don't mind me asking, where were you going when my sisters and I saw you last week?

Irena said...

If you wouldn’t mind me asking you where were you going last week when my sister and I saw you?

Veronica Baig said...

Samantha:A good start--think about pronoun usage and punctuation.
Ying: Good, but think carefully about the punctuation.
Irena: You're part way there--check auxiliary verb usage and pronoun usage, and punctuation,

Dejo said...

If you don't mind me asking, where you going when my sisters' and I saw you last week?

Veronica Baig said...

Dejo: You're on the right track but think about verb form and punctuation;-)

Janine said...

If you don't mind me asking, where were you going when my sisters' and I saw you last week.

Irena said...

If you don’t mind me asking you, “Where did you go last week when my sister and I saw you?”

Veronica Baig said...

Janine: Almost there--no apostrophe (that's not a possessive), and other punctuation.
Irena: Very close.