Friday, May 14, 2010

GRAMMAR QUESTION, May 14th, 2010

Correct the errors in the following sentence:
Every one: women, elders, and children were cried when we had arrived with the survivors who had terrifyingly been injured and burned in a crushable plain.


AMIN said...

Everyone, including the women, elders and children, were crying when we had arrived with the terribly injured and burned survivors from a crushed plane.

Veronica Baig said...

AMIN: You've made a lot of progress with this sentence; now think about subject-verb agreement and verb tense;-)