Correct the errors in the following sentence:
For entertaining Hai likes to go to outdoors concerts in the Summer or during the Winter, he watches reality television's shows.
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For entertainment in the summer, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts, and in the winter, he watches reality television programs.
For entertainment in the summer, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts. During the winter, he watches reality television shows.
Blowen: Great--just one little punctuation problem;-)
Kelsey: That's an interesting solution--two sentences.
For entertainment Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts in the summer, and during the winter he likes to watch reality shows on television.
For entertainment in the Summer, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts, and during the Winter, he watches reality television shows.
Irena: A good solution.
Janine: Almost there; you have a problem with capitalization.
Hai enjoys going to outdoor concerts in the summer and watches reality television shows during winter for entertainment.
Nancy: Almost--think parallel construction (the verb "enjoys" controls two ideas in your sentence).
The entertainment Hai enjoys is going to outdoor concerts in the summer and watch reality television shows in winter.
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