Sunday, February 3, 2008

GRAMMAR QUESTION, Feb. 3rd

Correct the errors in the following sentence:

For entertaining Hai likes to go to outdoors concerts in the Summer or during the Winter, he watches reality television's shows.

Remember that there is more than one possible correct answer.

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9 comments:

BLowen said...

For entertainment in the summer, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts, and in the winter, he watches reality television programs.

Kelsey said...

For entertainment in the summer, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts. During the winter, he watches reality television shows.

Veronica Baig said...

Blowen: Great--just one little punctuation problem;-)
Kelsey: That's an interesting solution--two sentences.

Irena said...

For entertainment Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts in the summer, and during the winter he likes to watch reality shows on television.

Janine said...

For entertainment in the Summer, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts, and during the Winter, he watches reality television shows.

Veronica Baig said...

Irena: A good solution.
Janine: Almost there; you have a problem with capitalization.

Nancy said...

Hai enjoys going to outdoor concerts in the summer and watches reality television shows during winter for entertainment.

Veronica Baig said...

Nancy: Almost--think parallel construction (the verb "enjoys" controls two ideas in your sentence).

Nancy said...

The entertainment Hai enjoys is going to outdoor concerts in the summer and watch reality television shows in winter.