Thursday, March 27, 2008

ALL CHANGE! March 27th

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

Amber greedily ate the chocolate Easter eggs from her aunt.

1. change the subject noun 2. change the direct object noun
3. change the indirect object noun 4. change the adjectives
5. change the adverb name 6. change the verb name
7. change the verb tense

9 comments:

Janine said...

Jessica greedily ate the chocolate Easter eggs from her aunt.

Margaret said...

Amber greedily ate the lemon buns from her aunt.

Veronica Baig said...

Janine: Good.
Margaret: Keep the change that Janine made, and then just change the object noun--you have changed the adjective as well.
NEXT STUDENT: Start from "Jessice greedily ate the chocolate buns from her aunt."

Irena said...

Jessica greedily ate the chocolate buns from her mom."

Veronica Baig said...

Irena: Good change, but I must admit Ihave doubts about chocolate buns!

Irena said...

Jessica greedily ate the chocolate cookies from her mom."

Kelsey said...

4) Jessica greedily ate the molasses cookies from her mom.

Tammy said...

5.) Jessica quickly ate the molasses cookies from her mom.

Veronica Baig said...

Irena: That's better;-)
Kelsey and Tammy: Good changes:-)