Monday, November 10, 2008

GRAMMAR QUESTION, Nov. 10th, 2009

Correct the errors in the following sentence

The artful work was stunned, not only were the colours bright but each of the many donating paintings were creative, individualistic and shown originality.

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Amin said...

The art works stunned me; not only were the colors bright but all of the paintings donated were creative, individualistic, and were showing originality.

Thomas said...

The artful work was stunning me as the colours were bright, and each of the paintings that were donated were creative, individual and were showing originality.

Veronica Baig said...

AMIN & THOMAS: Your use of "stunned" gives a different meaning to the sentence, and do you mean that only the donated paintings were creative, etc.?