Thursday, November 20, 2008

GRAMMAR QUESTION, November 20, 2009

Correct the errors in the following sentence

While I had arrived in Paris neither the bus or the trains was running, the following day the buses ran and trains had been started to move later at the afternoon.

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Amin said...

When I was arriving in Paris, the buses and the trains weren't running, although the buses started to run the next day and the trains in the afternoon.

Dejo said...

When I arrived in Paris, the buses and the trains were not running.They started running the following day starting with the buses in morning and the trains in the afternoon.

Veronica Baig said...

AMIN: There is some improvement here, but think about verb tense and punctuation.
DEJO: That's a good solution--it's nice to have you participating again!